Thursday, March 17, 2011

Reflection on commercial

I thought my commercial was good.I thought it was good because we had 4 props,2 sprite and 2 ear things.We also included persuasive techniques  and we supported it with details.There was two bloopers in my commercial,one was on Isaac when he thought it was over he took his ear thing off and took a drink,and the other was on me when I accidently hit the sprite can and it started spinning.I thought my commercial could have been longer though.

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  1. Max, I also agree that you and Isaac did a good job on the commercial.You did add the things you needed aand were prepared. Also some things you missed. It could have been longer and your post. Overall I think you and Isaac did an ok job on the commercial.

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  2. Good job on this post Max, you did a good job on the commercial in class, too. I think you shouldn't use the word "things" anymore and replace that word. I thought your commercial could of been longer, too. Overall great posst Max, keep up the good work!

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