Thursday, March 10, 2011
Convinceing A T.V Station
I think you guys have my commercial about Sprite on T.V.I want my commercial on T.V for Sprite because my commercial we have people drinking and saying good things about sprite and we show a lot of excitement on our commercial.Another reason are commercial should be on T.V is because we show persuasive techniques.One of our examples are "Hey check this out its Eminem's favorite drink."The last reason is at the end we close it out with a closing statement about Sprite.I think this commercial will be very good to be on T.V!!!!!!
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Awesome post Max! Good job explaining everything out. I thought it could of been a little longer but it was still great! I liked your vocab, too
ReplyDeleteGood job Max!I don't think you should have started with that white highlight stuff because it made it hard to see the words.I like how you included what your doing in your commercial like when you wrote "I want my commercial on T.V for Sprite because my commercial we have people drinking and saying good things about sprite and we show a lot of excitement on our commercial." I also like how you wrote that you use persuasive techniques and how you put an example of a persuasive technique.I also think it could have been longer.I think this is a good blog.Keep up the good work Max!
ReplyDeleteGood post Max. I like how you included everything about your product and persuaded and a little bit longer. Overall you did a great job though.
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