Thursday, October 7, 2010
childhood
During my childhood i was born and I got a blanket.when i was 2 months old i got a toy race car I loved that toy till i got a different toy.when I was four years old i broke my arm and went to the hospital. when i was 5 my brother sam was born now he is six years old. I gave sam my blanket when he was three.
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Nice job with your childhood writing Max! I liked how you included your bother Sam in your writing. I thought that you could of put how you broke your arm though. Over all i thought it was a really good piece of writing. Keep up the good work!
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